lessisapossibility: Introduction

Tuesday, March 22, 2005

soap said...: It starts with a credible protagonist; some conflict arises around the second paragraph; the dialogue sounds somehow foreign, but convincing. A good intro hooks the reader, not with forced tensions or attention-grabbing gimmicks, but some honest insight into experiences similar, and yet superior, to his own.; 8:17 AM
yk said...: α] είναι γλύκας (τέλειος)
β] σου μοιάζει τρομερά; 12:48 PM
Anonymous said...: sissoula, was your comment meant for this post?; 3:27 PM
soap said...: Steph, was your post (called "introduction") meant to be an introduction?; 6:35 PM
Anonymous said...: Sissoula, you are waaay ahead of me! I'm struggling here... help me out...; 8:29 PM
soap said...: Steph, don't knock yourself out. It was nothing worth a struggle; it was just my (silly, failed?) attempt to apply some literary analysis to your little onion's unfolding story. You're (half of) the author, he's the hero, and I am your captivated reader. If this was the intro, I can’t wait for Chapter 1.; 9:56 AM
Anonymous said...: OK, gotcha!

Btw my "little onion" has so far been called the following names (all by me, of course):

- Τέρας
- Κτήνος
- Χοντροπατάτας
- Παλιομπιφτέκης
- Χοντρομπιζέλης
- Αρακάς
- Φέρυ-Μπώτ (If you see him in his little bath-tub you'll understand)
- etc...; 10:23 AM